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October 12, 2022 at 3:39 pm #23913

MLS AdminKeymasterComparison / contrast is a common pattern for writing about similarities and differences. It is used in all academic fields. Please describe how you organized your comparison / contrast essay? What did you learn from this Writing unit?
October 17, 2022 at 7:59 am #24191
Nancy WeiParticipantI usually structure compare-and-contrast essays in one of two ways:
Discussing one then the other, according to the subjects themselves
Discussing each subject in connection to each point, according to specific points.
In this Unit, I used the second way to write my essay and it’s quite effective.October 20, 2022 at 9:02 am #24424
Bizheng FuParticipantTechniques for making comparisons:
1. Observe carefully and capture the salient features.
2. Complement with each other to form an echoing relationship.
3、Highlight the subject and make comparisons.
4、Clarify the center and analyze the essential features.In this Writing unit, I learned how to analyze a film and how to cite examples.
October 27, 2022 at 2:39 pm #24649
Dr. Dan ZebeljanParticipantExcellent job, Nancy! Again do not forget to review my Academic Essay Lesson: “Academic Essay Success Criteria: The Student Success Checklist”, U1L2a
October 27, 2022 at 2:46 pm #24650
Dr. Dan ZebeljanParticipantCorrect, Bizheng. Don’t forget to review the Essay Outline in the same Unit 1 which clearly tells you the Comparison and Contrast strategies such as Maxi-Blocking (shorter paragraphs-one for comparison and the next one for the contrast), or the so-called Mini-Blocking (longer paragraphs but each sentence is construed of both comparisons and contrast, using words such as “although, however, similar to, etc…” For example, here is the C & C Thesis Sample, which I used in the Essay Lesson. Please pay attention to the aforementioned C&C transitional words: “Although Clementine wanted to ‘brain-erase’ Joel due to her innate impetuousness and restlessness to move on with her life and perhaps seek out another lover, Joel, on the other hand, agreed to ‘brain-erase’ Clementine not because he did not love her anymore, but because he was sincerely hurt by her; yet ultimately, he did not want to erase her, because it was that very restlessness and impetuousness of hers that meant to him, an absolute freedom from his usual, ordinary and unexciting self.”
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